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Old 02-16-2017, 05:14 PM
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l came up to meet you.
All this time,
And then l saw you
From above the heads
From beside the curb
From around the bend.
In the face of a stranger
l heard you were dead,
But you’re not here.
You’re going places
So l hope she’s cute
And more than me—
(Or enough for you)
While l go back home
To eat and sleep.

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Old 02-24-2017, 09:27 AM
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Edit: whoops! didn't mean to set a bad edit. i couldn't see what the things was and i was just typing for fun and then was gonna edit/delete and then sorry i'll just leave it here just in case.

does this need a promo? i was wondering if it could be considered racy at all? 'cause i wasn't going for like snoozes, and i thought it was really great.
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Old 02-24-2017, 10:55 AM
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i thought it was really great.

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The author critiquing the author's work.

I oughtta try that.



No, it an't racy unless you been raised Quaker.
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Old 02-24-2017, 07:31 PM
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There just aren't many poetry folk around lately.

This is really lovely chat. I see the whole thing.

I don't know if it's good poetry because I ain't qualified to judge. Maybe someone will stumble in soon to let you know.

And naw, it's not racy.
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I relate to both of those thing! I don't have any qualification for judging poems but I did enjoy it.
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Old 03-22-2017, 02:28 PM
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I don't have any qualification for judging poems [/QUOTE]


Me neither.
But that doesn't stop me.
Ain't even slowed me down.
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Racy? mmmm...kind of like a pace lap, with a white convertible out front, and the thunder of a hundred unmuffled engines, well okay maybe just fifty engines.
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Old 03-31-2017, 04:07 PM
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Racy? mmmm...kind of like a pace lap, with a white convertible out front, and the thunder of a hundred unmuffled engines, well okay maybe just fifty engines.

These are like four cylinder engines, right?
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I'm Chat's a four, I'm thinking Offenhauser. ( Pure racing action )
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haha did not know that
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