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Old 04-16-2018, 11:39 AM
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at times
when poetry
breaks to a
nice gallop
the sound it makes
reminds us of
others
humans versus the worst
for
what else better then thus
words in a whirlpool
immerse
rehearse to release
the curse
then capture to burst
the meaning of diverse
it is in just the feeling of trust
sense would want and must.

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really cool poem, nacia! i missed you... u been gone for so long; where ya been hiding this? you always got tricks up your sleeve!

"then capture to burst"<-- i like that line.
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