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When I turn the lights out,
As I live in all his liesó
It just doesnít come about
To the movies, the way time flies;

I knew what I wanted to doó
óBut then, doesnít everyone?
Iíve got nowhere to run to,
And Iím thinking that heís won;ó

My face is hurt from smiling hard;
I donít really mean to say what I say,
And it sucks to always be on guard,ó
Than have to relive yesterdayó

I hate the way I live inside of him;ó
Every day bursts with hate and mean words
We had to go out last night, on his whim.ó
His voice, my voice; it cuts like swords;

This time, the birds will use the wait,ó
I can do this, a little while, a little longeró
A sparrow keeping me up, though itís lateó
"What doesnít kill you makes you stronger".

Iím done for now, like the best of Giza,
Such ardor for a tyke my sizeó
Might and power are made by taking in the vista,
Maybe, I'll yell louder, heíll see through my guise.

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loving the rhymes in this piece
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