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Old 09-11-2018, 06:08 PM
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Originally Posted by Chinspinner View Post
Cheers, better, the last few lines?

They’re a scene ender. Sufficient to end the scene. I need more to see if it worked.

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They’re a scene ender. Sufficient to end the scene. I need more to see if it worked.
Scene ain't over, just got bored.
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Scene ain't over, just got bored.


You’re a twat, but I know what you mean. I’m probably a twat too. Adulting is hard, no?
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You’re a twat, but I know what you mean. I’m probably a twat too. Adulting is hard, no?
Yeah, it is a bitch.
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