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Thunderbolt Spring of the Starship

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Old 04-17-2017, 05:13 PM
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Default Thunderbolt Spring of the Starship

Thunderbolt spring in a star-ship.
Electric currents for the yellow speed
Riding the waves of a footwork power-line.
Poles around the clouds of the sky
Feet webbed in a foot of electric skyline.
Stars stretching into the conduct er of the honey ship
Thunderbolt spring from the galactic knife
from your shoe, a rightly beam.

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Old 04-18-2017, 11:25 AM
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Hi Yonathan1

Hope you don't mind my asking - are you a Podiatrist?

Work life can spill over into creativity - whole lot of feet and footwear going on here.

What do you mean by a "rightly beam"?
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