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The Broken Record Player

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Old 05-11-2017, 11:01 AM
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You smoke and choke on the last note
you wrote. Silly little singing sorry tunes,
played out over the spread of a 24 hour day.

Lay broken and twisted, missed it. Whistled it
in your ear. Words you heard yourself say
today, tomorrow, the next day and so on.

It doesn’t matter. Your eyes will catch fire
on some new word or phrase to simmer on.
Then that sick sorry tune will play out again.

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Guess someone's pissed you off Lmc
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Haha...I guess you can say that.
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