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I make a Sight—sate or slacken—
Mankind is a Heap—gorged
Or a Term—as I weigh in—
The Tides—do I command,

I hold Preference to the skies—
Greater, in my Hand
Abaft lesser Clout—about—
A foggy Day’s Cloister—

Inasmuch as I Direct it—
It—Life—and Tyranny
Who is the Monocrat—none can find—
Nor was I in the Question—

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Easy Wealth—grew I—
Although my Yield—
Was certain as the Day—
And in the Evening, counted more
Than the previous—notch,

Thru-out the Year, I made the Age
Yet the discernless Game—
Assumed fewer by Increasing—
Than the System that it’d grown.
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she had thought it often enough, this writing getting harder and the ease with which to usher her words into a pit stop, Grace and chat elegant in their lapping. ‘So made it home babes and they’ll sort it out in a few days ... do love that school run but it’s dangerous terrain with an unreliable set of wheels’ ... He watched her thoughts triggered, synaptic waves crashing - flash the flooding ... some manufacturers have a reputation for innovation, they put prototypes out there cheaper than their competitors without exhaustive trials and the consumer burdens the risk. That, back then had been a sweet ride but it’s design flaws made it incompatible with a life on the road. ‘... anna ground to a halt once on passing through a tunnel, a busy motorway - speeds like autobahn, middle lane of four and a chatty one in the back oblivious until not then. You know a Porsche shunted us babe! ... saw him cruising ever nearer in the rear view mirror, he simply reversed - met anna’s gaze in the passing and sped off ...’ Liquid calm the moment of life-death decision making - whether to get out of the vehicle and flag down the traffic or remain that sitting duck heartbeats away from a pileup. ‘Do you get out and run for the hills, sort of flee this reality or brace yourself, freeze or fight babe? ...’ anna had jumped out and stopped the motorway flow lane by lane, willing them to see her ... only then grabbing the fetal clenched toddler by one arm from his car seat as those purposeful menfolk tried to push her car across to the hard shoulder before continuing on thankful for their lives. ‘It had to be dragged over by mechanical winch eventually, gearbox seized. The whole incident over in a matter of minutes ... often wonder if Porche man remembers the deal he made that day ...’


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Twice thought I that Love had arrived
Though Love had fled the Sight—
Like marooned men—
Expect they scan the mainland—
But midway of Davy Jones’s Locker—

And grapple escapeless—only to test
Just as desperately as me—
How many the illusory Banks—
Afore the Wharf should be.
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I aimed to meet Her if I could—
But Death had— the same mind
Yet the Prize was His—it delivers;
And the Loss—Mine—

I wisht to relay how I’d hoped
Upon just the lone Occasion—
But Death had got caught up—in First—
As such, she had spent, with Him—

I amble now—tis my Peace—
Moreover to lie still—to lie’d be—
The advance of Tempest
To past—and Me.—
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I wanted to need—just humble means—
Like inner Peace and Pearly Gates open’d;
Within avails—'twould appeased be
Like so, Heav’n and I’d—be broken—

Seeing that the latter—included myth—
'Twere got by my Demeanor,
And also the First—but I ammend—
My Tact could bring Either—

And so, unto this Thread—I beseech:
O Jis, give in to me—
A Wonder not Mighty as Thine,
But mite—ample—to be—

A steeped Calm about my Face—
The Seraphs—all drew back—
Somber Saints crept along—in my Grace
Although they number up—within Almanac—

I fled my House, left my clothes—
My doorway is still open—
The Tide has soakt it up—
And Raptures—glimmered—alas—

That I so extant—yet be hopeful—
Took I the Reason for—Truth
That “Howsoever ye shall asketh,
It become given unto you"—

Now I, more cunning—search the Sky
For some green-eyed Pair—
As a Charlatan—cheating—Crime—
Cagey Frauds—be out—for Air—
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I rarely felt at Home—before—
Though in the highest Manors—
I cannot feel it there—I know—
My Kingdom down below,—

Although ’tis Sabbath—from Behaviors,
That I’ve gleaned upon,—
Should Christ Himself make a Call
Nor ever paused to explain—heal all—

Such ways to say—densen and ram
Some Telescopes down our neck—
I’d flee from Him—as long it be
To escape the Day, you see?
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I saw this Prince today at Noon—
He had on the Headdress of course,
The Garland, wreath was all,
And he was imposing—on a horse!

Quite certain I am he Sovereign was—
Inside this ashen Tunic's azure—
And certain I am, the Insignia and laws
Inside that Tunic’s fold, I’m sure!

For ’twas far too much splendor—
A Viscount couldn’t get off so ambitious!
Mayhap a Tzar bantam—
A Bishop—something else luxurious!

I seemed some outward, frayed Hazard
His Eminence overlookt—
Restless a majestic outing
This sovereign anytime booked!

I wonder shall the noble Carriage
About which stay Pages and Knaves
Have importance similar, up high;—
O, how my entire Estate—raves!
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I never hear the word “misery”:
Without a childish tug—
The hurried flash of apprehension,
The lofty inclination;

I never read of armed guards
Before the Mansion—cover—
That Strain—Heave—drags me down,
Just to damn the light of day;—

I never feel imprisoned
With manservants around—
But then, it is a steep somersault
For some who’ve had without.
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I had not bet but once
And ’twas in the clear,
Only Once did I stand
Before my father’s door!

Sweet—that paragon of beauty
Paid off my meager sum—
Robber! Baron!—Dear!
I was rich once before!
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I’ve never seen an Angel;
And I know they aren’t Real—
But I know one who thinks he has—
By my delighted face!

I’ve never stayed in Heaven
Nor would I ever—Need—
But I’ve certain—felt it better
As the sheets tore even.
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I measure some hidden treasure
Atop a mountain—all eyes—
Then, the sun—his pillage won
Hunch below and stake his prize;

He bent right here,
As brought you near—
A space had left among
Had an arrow cut up the heel
My soul had given overlong;

That was sublime ore—
I wish 'twas trusting made;
’Tis about the fairest mold
Had ever blest the probe!

If I should hold my secrets;
If I should bear guise;
If and as I weary wander
Rent and income abrupt—

Would—insider acquaint me
Could I haply intersect—
Said insider play Judas;
Lachesis bisect!
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with this many posts how could the goblin not reply, adding "...me too, I have got to get my teeth done, smiling but then not showing them neither, still smiling "...no there not bad in themselves, plus they're all mine still, only that the lower rank needs a full plaque removal with some strong stain remover, yes even goblins must face these sort of things...", apart from that the day was sunny even too hot for september, plus the old man looked much older in just the four months from the start of the onset of his wife's condition, though she looked fine at this point and that trip to japan in febuary seemed very much on the cards still, relating "...no, I just wish things to return to the stage before all this started, one where I'm not thinking of what I might become afterwards, no I want to live just one day at a time again, a life without either blackmailer nor seductress, well no seductress beyond you and this honestly between us I mean...", in fact, the day was just too hot to write anything much, so he would write more he promised, and hope anna would keep up the contact, smiling "...many men pay dearly to chat with beautiful ladies on the internet, so you see just how lucky I am to have you here, and no I'll never ask you to reveal yourself to me, no miss whoeveryouare, you're just fine as you are being all the honest woman I'll ever need here..."


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"...my days feels better now, somehow I'm in near control on my emotions again..." smiled the goblin with his captain responding to his warmth better, adding "...I hope this episode is over, she looks so well today compared to during her treatment, and what if the first doctor had been wrong and what if it wasn't "pt4a witihout", where had my wife not been sitting next to me at the time I would have asked him "why the discrepancy" between what they first told me and the explanation given today..." but the goblin knew better than to push his luck, simply he was happy that for now at least she was well again, adding "...anyway I'm not thinking about anything "post wife", instead I'm just letting one day drift into the next as should be...", yet the goblin also knew the blackmailer could show up at any moment, it just wasn't there till suddenly it was


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"...me, I've given up trying to tell my children anything..." observed the goblin suspecting that it was their mother whom they shared their worries with, then adding "...and besides, they're not at a listening age being all grown up and branching out now...", but the goblin kind of felt better for it, where if one advises someone one is invariably blamed even when they haven't followed the advice anyway, sighing "...no they just want me to listen mostly, so now I have learned to listen to the very, and then go for the standard three question approach of "so what has happened, oh I see, well that case what do you feel to be the answer then, ah that's clever indeed, so you'll tell me how it goes won't you", only to be expected to contribute financially somehow, and get blamed when it goes wrong, and told either "see, told you so" or quite forgotten when it goes right...", for in truth the goblin might well be the head of the family but his wife was the neck of the family who turns the head in whichever way she wants


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I mostly went thru—Town—
As I left from school—
Thought of how they lived there—
Also—how things got so hushful—

I never knew the timing when—
Love—Passion would enter—
Prior, by the empty Cup—
Rather have it all gone.

'Tis rasher than the sunset.
’Tis rarer than daybreak—
The Orchids try to settle down—
And Orioles can flutter here—

And when you grow weary—
Or burned—or stricken—cold—
Take comfort in my promise
Beneath the inset mold,
Try to pack it, take a flight—
And with these, I shall unfold!
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... and the diagnostics says no fault babe, my real the bad, anna the misfire, the faulty throttle, loss of power and what the fuck am cruising on a curvaceous Jurassic shallow marine platform, oh so pretty, blind the bends, valley cuts deep and that retreat and speed the fix the open road and juggernauts thundering heavy, fooling, tom fooling, foolery ... take me at my word front-desk-lady, tell them really do, my really - this fault could cost me dear, no mind games - flloundering on the forecourt, do no harm - ask them grease clad tinkers to register my stalling, let me look ‘em in the eye ain’t fooling and you loving this fear in my face, break neck pace, choked the voice in my embrace, drain my colour, get your kicks ... ‘For the record’ she whispered - ‘wasn’t for the choosing but my wheels ain’t cruising babes and the interface controls the gaming, am a goner, front desk fucker .. ‘ thinking ... tell my virtual lover, my kids dear, my brother the shirt I wear, no despair, can you hear me Tom. ‘nah, babe, sweet the drive, beautiful the alive, the speed, the need, the thoughtful mechanic cocked his ear, worked his spanner, the throttle the gear, the glide, the ride ...’ - forever love from anna x


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You could've stated—your fee—
A Lotus, for a Line
'Tis close yet can I dare say—
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Sometime, as my fortunes display—
Overly hung to be airborne against;
I esteem Myself—that would I pay—
And these and Paragraph,—lotless—

My Paucity gains forth—the Clue
I Pry whether the Man—should,
Who searchless—garners the Riches—
Whereas Those—Who never Could—

I select the Wealth—to soothe
The Upheaval, ’twas too Golden,
It halted upwards—such a Thief,
Quite often—to embolden;

Nor ever such gropesome Gloves
Chance Champion unto the Mine—
Or in the long—uneven Droves
Nor lose, becomes my Time;

How ready they went—befitting—
So well, so enlightening—
I know not the other, Grant nor Desire;
Become completely, passionately Afire!
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goblins are an adoring sort, and i had often assumed goblins to be the serene and blissful type. if this particular goblin has had problems and is going thru the pangs, i will always be around to grant him more posts. the goblin.. the goblin… TO THE GOBLIN! (cheers, as i down more eggnog all by myself)
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I saw that some people vanished—
As yet a little girl—
Assumed they kept distant
Or secret Areas remote—
But then was told they perished
A Truth—withheld the little girl—
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Most have I misled—
Most have I played—
But One crept thru-out,
That Himself made—the cut;

In the nighttime, wearily—
Like acid and heavier curls
I swore, and I shall—nevermore
Forget!

I’m a guard, a wolf,
Ever the pet princess—
A King I sought, The Gardener
Have I found out.—
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The faceless deities,
Little tows and tugs—
Always wreak havoc—
Such winds they devour;
Some holy dolor;
Upon our unbidden thoughts,—
Like a catalyst to author,
Like gangsters and frays,
Like Endeavors unto the sea.
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I review my sentences—surely better—
Then read it aloud with my lips,—
Right to check if I made any errors
In Judgement, its max Requirement—
The Occasion, and Time, of the Infamy—
But because the late, the Affecting Contour
That we shall grant "mercy” unto the Soul—than
Utter Jury vote to have Me in—
Made I my Works accustomed—with distant acme—
At least, ‘twould not be a green Misery—
But Love, and Death, fitted—
Met Hope, fully as company—
Greet, then ’twould be passed, nary a Clue—
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I draw from Love—that Earth is small—
But Misery—dictatorial—
And far too many with their Wounds—
Still, what say thee of that?

I draw from Hope—that we all perish—
The best yet escaped Immortality
And those ones excel in their Concealment,—
Still, what say thee of that?

I draw from Life, that in such Reason—
Somehow, it should hold, thus go even—
Some new Format, another temple given,
Still, what say thee of that?
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I stole from the Forest,
Those gullible Woods;—
Their ever credulous Eaves—
I bring to you Hours, and their Flowers—
My end—aim I simply to please;

I viewed the Baubles, noisily—
I grappled and rompled, then went away—
What'll the staid Hardwood say—
What’ll the Maple Leaf utter?
My least Attempt, to garnish!
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I'd reckon that—when could One sum it up—
Firstly comes Prose—Then the Moon—
Then Winter—Then Dead Mouse—
And when—because the List is at its end—

Yet, glancing aback—the First precise—of them—
It Underwent the Full—
The Rest seem a wishless Sight—
I write them as—such Poets—All—

Their Winter—conveys a Worthy Epoch—
They’d pay up for a Moon—
Their House—should allow for frills—
And if the distant Mouse—

Bide Loving while they put together,
Because ones who revere Them—
Rather too trying a Face—
Than make good—Dreams!
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I was surprised—because I tanked—
I betted 'twould be not this way—
Yet as my dominion sunk—
My Mind got sane,

I saluted my collapst Post—
I snitched bound—also—Chance—
I abett'd the Film—from strict Hymnal—

And, once the first Blush came off
Nor held its EyeBrows still—
I fought within them—
Cheek to cheek—

I spoke of Realms I'd known—
Wherein Kingdoms’d flewn,
Whose Remembrance was untrue
Though I was also—insanely true—
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I deem no antithesis—The Firmaments shut up—
I feel the Billows flux—
The World returns his Stratospheres;—
I plead the Universe—a Crux—

And it glides—and for muses—he lays;
Myself As Flecks—unto a Disco Ball—
Left out beyond Circumstances—
But only the Child of the Satin—Ball

’Tis early,—’tis late;
Ladies and gents, Bide—I my Vice—
Unto simpler instruments!
I remain unaware—how he does that—
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I felt the siroccos within me—tear—
I think they turned—for me,
But Humanity, abuse this affair:
I plea, “Entity”—
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