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Old 06-28-2017, 05:51 AM
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haha it`s clever

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u take such long breaks from this forum
Perhaps if you posted this on one of his pieces he would see it.
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haha it`s clever
What colours do you favour?
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I like this too.

Behind every life-seasoned, tough cowboy is an even tougher cowgirl wearin' the trousers.
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Originally Posted by Grace Gabriel View Post
I like this too.

Behind every life-seasoned, tough cowboy is an even tougher cowgirl wearin' the trousers.

May I keep my boots?

Please, Ma'am.
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Depends.

Would they fit me?
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Originally Posted by Grace Gabriel View Post
Depends.

Would they fit me?
Tony Llama
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Size 9 and a half.
Similar to style # 7900
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Originally Posted by Nick Pierce View Post
Tony Llama
Black
Size 9 and a half.
Similar to style # 7900
They're yours for now.

If my feet swell in the summer heat, you'll need to Zola Budd your way to the range.
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Ah little Zola. She was a hero for us runners back in the late eighties.
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Old 07-02-2017, 05:33 AM
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Originally Posted by Nick Pierce View Post
What colours do you favour?
Mr. Pierce?

Yes, Nick?

I am concerned that I may have inadvertently made an insensitive request here.

How so, Nick?

Noting the non response I am beginning to wonder if the commentor is blind.

Nick?

Well, you see (no churlish pun intended) being blind, presumably from birth, would prevent any knowledge of colour thereby making preferences impossible.


Yes, Nick. That seems plausible. How do you account for the initial reading of the poem?

Oh, I would figure a not sighted person would have friends that help out with things.
I myself used to hang with Blind Peter Stein and would con him when we were out in his rowboat with him at the oars.

Oh, I ... er ... I understand now.
Why do you suppose a friend would not relay your query?

I guessin' out of consideration for both my ignorance of the actual circumstances and 'cause they wanna be nice to their friend.

Nick, all of that may be accurate but it does seem to embody a great deal of presumption and very little fact. Don't you agree?


Yep. But in America, these days, that is how we citizens tend to function.


Oh.
Yes, Nick.
I do s ... ahem ... point taken, Nick.
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Originally Posted by Nick Pierce View Post
Mr. Pierce?

Yes, Nick?

I am concerned that I may have inadvertently made an insensitive request here.

How so, Nick?

Noting the non response I am beginning to wonder if the commentor is blind.

Nick?

Well, you see (no churlish pun intended) being blind, presumably from birth, would prevent any knowledge of colour thereby making preferences impossible.


Yes, Nick. That seems plausible. How do you account for the initial reading of the poem?

Oh, I would figure a not sighted person would have friends that help out with things.
I myself used to hang with Blind Peter Stein and would con him when we were out in his rowboat with him at the oars.

Oh, I ... er ... I understand now.
Why do you suppose a friend would not relay your query?

I guessin' out of consideration for both my ignorance of the actual circumstances and 'cause they wanna be nice to their friend.

Nick, all of that may be accurate but it does seem to embody a great deal of presumption and very little fact. Don't you agree?


Yep. But in America, these days, that is how we citizens tend to function.


Oh.
Yes, Nick.
I do s ... ahem ... point taken, Nick.
Yep, that should bait an answer.

Sure her friend will be delighted to facilitate interaction with a ramblin' schizophrenic...
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‘Girls who are boys
Who like boys to be girls
Who do boys like they're girls
Who do girls like they're boys
Always should be someone you really love’

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Originally Posted by iDrew View Post
‘Girls who are boys
Who like boys to be girls
Who do boys like they're girls
Who do girls like they're boys
Always should be someone you really love’

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You've got the same take on that whole situation as I do, Drew.

Originally Posted by Grace Gabriel View Post
Depends.

Would they fit me?
I think Depends fit everyone, don't they?
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