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Old 05-28-2017, 01:22 PM
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No legacy
is deeper
than Truth

and if our tongues
were made from sand
how much more
would we care
as we speak

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No legacy is deeper than truth..........nice one, chat.

Like the second stanza, just feel it needs another one in the middle to give it more clarity. lt'll be interesting to see what others think.
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thanks for reading, kev! i sure hope there are others...
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The others have passed on by, chat...............I get a connection from the words you wrote ( deeper and sand) of water, sea......ocean---depth of ocean--depth of thought (before we speak), thought it wasn't clear enough, thats why i mentioned a stanza in between....
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i guess it doesn't translate as a short mini-poem. it's supposed to be brief and thought-provoking... thanks for the input.
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I love this short but makes a person question/think ^^ for a moment.
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And I like this. In fact, just take it as given that I like everything you post lol. More interesting thoughts about talking shite with a sandpaper mouth. Nice
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i like how you translated@candraH

are you lying right now? kekek
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