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Inverse canst not befall
That potent Prosperity—
Whose sources are inferior,
Whilst soon as Adversity,—

A Diamond overtakes
In far—Middle Eastern Implements—
Misfortune has no grounds—
Could mar it, once found—

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Canst not, although technically correct sounds clumsy, what is so wrong with can’t. By using the archaic, especially in the first line, sounds pretentious. Now WTF? This ain’t like any itch I’ve ever had.


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it's all a mystery, aren't u curious about what it's about tho? like, i was trying to inspire questions...
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