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Old 05-08-2018, 12:00 PM
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beauty is a sense
of duty
to attract it must
distract from the fact
that what you see
is not always what you know
the risk is the element
but the essence
is the adamant
together they make
a formidable condiment
life
which has the sentiment
to bring together utlitmate.

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beauty is built on memories that can not be recalled
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beauty is built on memories that can not be recalled
yes but it can be changed.
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beauty--
is a foresight,
that cannot be seen
nor neglected.

nice poem, nacia! very inspiring, as you can tell.
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beauty--
is a foresight,
that cannot be seen
nor neglected.

nice poem, nacia! very inspiring, as you can tell.
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