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Old 02-15-2018, 12:49 AM
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have you seen them
talking about us?
like youíre a sailor
iím the ocean breeze

letís get together
a wanted man
a little bit of loveís great spring
like youíd never feel again

chorus: how long will it be
till the sun sets you free,
itís a little of lifeís
big old insecuritiesÖ
a little bit of life
and the sun brings you to me

like loveís great spring
itís coming down to me
like you canít beat the road
fast enough for where weíll go

chorus

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Nice! Just a thought - the word coming in last stanza could be replaced with a more active or attractive word, flowing, splashing, etc.
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Originally Posted by chat bot View Post
have you seen them
talking about us?
like youíre a sailor
iím the ocean breeze

letís get together
a wanted man
a little bit of loveís great spring
like youíd never feel again

chorus: how long will it be
till the sun sets you free,
itís a little of lifeís
big old insecuritiesÖ
a little bit of life
and the sun brings you to me

like loveís great spring
itís coming down to me
like you canít beat the road
fast enough for where weíll go

chorus

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thanks for reading, guys!

i just get sick of an idea and then i hum along to old tunes until it sounds nice. inspiration for this wasn't much. i just felt like writing a lyric, lol.

nice to see you on my thread, nick!
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