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Old 09-02-2017, 01:49 PM
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Default Thief's and Liars

It seems that people are trying to steal my package. When people do this they not only kill the show, but they destroy me as an actor and all earning capability I have, they are merciless cunts.

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Semicolon between 'have' and 'they'.
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Old 09-03-2017, 01:45 AM
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
Semicolon between 'have' and 'they'.

You caught that, and missed the plural of 'thief' is 'thieves'?

What a complex mind you have BP.
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Old 09-03-2017, 05:51 AM
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Or an em dash or two complete sentences.
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