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Old 04-17-2013, 06:04 AM
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So I usually do short stories, and this is my first poem in years so it will probably be very bad. Don't worry Iím not going to go and try to do poems too, Iím just been told that these little bits sound more like poems. So that was a warning for you. Oh and yes I did quote Divine comedy in this. Just wanted to say that....just in case.

Drip, drop, drip, drop.
Cold and leaky.
Water, blood.

Drip, drop, drip, drop.
Fear is there.
Waiting for you.
Breathing, at your neck.
Slow, peaceful, dark.


Drip, drop, drip, drop.
Abandon all hope ye who enter.
For you shall never return.
Once you pass trough these gates.
Only thing youíll do is forget.

Drip, drop, drip, drop
Forget your families and friends you had.
Forget the lives you used to live.
Your joys and your sorrows.


Drip, drop, drip, drop.
Your name is one last thing we seek.
Forget it, leave it.
Where you are going you donít need it.

Drip, drop, drip, drop.
Cold and leaky
Water, blood.

Be kind to people on your way up, you may need them on your way down
Better to light a candle then to curse the darkness
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