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Old 02-09-2012, 02:55 PM
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I wrote this at about 3am when a storm was raging outside. I'm not sure what I think of it. Please let me know.


Verse One -

Stare at the blank walls
Listen as the rain falls.
Down down down.
Drown drown drown.
Drowing all the life forms
Like all of the other storms
Raging outside.
Screaming through the closed doors
Louder than the god’s wars.
All hope cast aside.

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And hear the thunder cloud, (thunder cloud)
Clap harsh and loud. (harsh and loud)
You never felt so low before. (low before)
Where’s the calm, after the storm? (after the storm)

Verse Two -

Hide under the covers,
Cry for your lovers.
Down down down.
Drown drown drown.
Drowing all the longing,
Losing all belongings,
You thought were yours.
Chase the storm, stab its heart,
To prove you want a fresher start.
To settle the scores.

Chorus -

And hear the thunder cloud, (thunder cloud)
Clap harsh and loud. (harsh and loud)
You never felt so low before. (low before)
Where’s the calm, after the storm? (after the storm)

Bridge –

Run with your soaking hair,
Through the storm and through despair.
Never look back to what’s been done
Though those were the days you saw the sun.

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And hear the thunder cloud, (thunder cloud)
Clap harsh and loud. (harsh and loud)
You never felt so low before. (low before)
Where’s the calm, after the storm? (after the storm)
Where’s the calm, after the storm?
After the storm,
After the storm.

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Old 02-09-2012, 06:23 PM
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