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Old 02-23-2018, 05:22 PM
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what ya write

Ya write about sex ... hoo boy,
how ya gonna make any point without someone
sayin' "You pokin' me where I don't like"

Politics;
pick a position and standby for opposition


Your life?

You think you had it bad?
I had to walk
5 miles to school
then
5 miles to get home

And it was uphill both ways


Broken heart -
puhleeze -
You don't know broken heart until you come home
and find your woman in bed with
your best friend
and
have to
demise
your dog


Okay, okay

That last one is an old joke

Hey - I'm boring but I ain't no plagiarist

Come to think of it
the uphill gag is also from an old joke

Hell, maybe I'm an old joke

No - that can't be right
I ain't laughin'
And you ain't either

Maybe I should write about religion

Sure

What could go wrong with that?


Aw, screw it
I'm gettin' me a dark pair of sunglasses
and
gonna keep my yap shut

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Old 07-07-2018, 04:51 AM
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what ya write

Ya write about sex ... hoo boy,
how ya gonna make any point without someone
sayin' "You pokin' me where I don't like"

Politics;
pick a position and standby for opposition


Your life?

You think you had it bad?
I had to walk
5 miles to school
then
5 miles to get home

And it was uphill both ways


Broken heart -
puhleeze -
You don't know broken heart until you come home
and find your woman in bed with
your best friend
and
have to
demise
your dog


Okay, okay

That last one is an old joke

Hey - I'm boring but I ain't no plagiarist

Come to think of it
the uphill gag is also from an old joke

Hell, maybe I'm an old joke

No - that can't be right
I ain't laughin'
And you ain't either

Maybe I should write about religion

Sure

What could go wrong with that?


Aw, screw it
I'm gettin' me a dark pair of sunglasses
and
gonna keep my yap shut



Nick?
Can I talk to you about this?

Nick?

Nick, those glasses are so dark I can not tell if you are looking at me or sleeping.

Nick?
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kind of lame compared to most of your other posts... but it is freewriting. nice work with the scheme
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Old 07-08-2018, 01:56 PM
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kind of lame compared to most of your other posts... but it is freewriting. nice work with the scheme



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