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Old 06-22-2018, 08:57 AM
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words travel
fast
like a rocket
they blast
in and out of locket
the hold their inner
pocket
to only come back
and pretend they were
passed
a future that asked
is it the present
that they wanted last?

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You write a lot like Charles Bukowski except without the swearing.
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Originally Posted by Yonathan1 View Post
You write a lot like Charles Bukowski except without the swearing.
Yonathan thank you.
Bukowski is a genius. He is the wordsmith everyone should look up.
I can see the similarities I never thought about it
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