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Old 06-28-2018, 03:21 PM
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love is a computer
two take as their tutor
to prove it is made
of pewter
silicon isn't cuter
it doesn't last
it is futile
now where is that router?

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Originally Posted by Nacia View Post
love is a computer
two take as their tutor
to prove it is made
of pewter
silicon isn't cuter
it doesn't last
it is futile
now where is that router?
Is this an internet poem?
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Old 06-28-2018, 04:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Yonathan1 View Post
Is this an internet poem?
hello there Yonathan
what do you mean an internet poem?
I wrote this on a whim.
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hello there Yonathan
what do you mean an internet poem?
I wrote this on a whim.
What is the poem about?
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Old 06-30-2018, 03:38 AM
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Originally Posted by Yonathan1 View Post
What is the poem about?
I am guessing it is about persons meeting off the internet.
But it also about how the internet is not reality. It is a made up world of fake hopes and illusions. Hence silicon it is a play on word with comparison to plastic surgery.
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