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Old 06-20-2018, 03:55 PM
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Love me like barbells tugging
hamstrings with donkeyforce
Youíre melody fleets

Youíre lyrics, a s y l a b l e
is a curse in cursive in
marshemello-brains
I canít thrive without bell-bottom curves
as first Index Britannica dictionaries.

Youíre a K-pop Idol swaying
hips like Nancy from Momoland
Rose bouquets donít show adoration,
lips do.

I show it like Spanish gigolos
confessing promises of love
French kisses.

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Old 06-23-2018, 09:27 AM
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I missed this one.
I like the play on words here especially the first two stanzsa.

Nancy from Momoland??

it is weird that men are called gigolos. I should really get to the origin
of this word to see why.

great writing as always Yonathan.
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Originally Posted by Nacia View Post
I missed this one.
I like the play on words here especially the first two stanzsa.

Nancy from Momoland??

it is weird that men are called gigolos. I should really get to the origin
of this word to see why.

great writing as always Yonathan.


A Korean girls singing group. We had our boy and girl band craze in the early 2000ís here in the states, but itís kinda died out. South Korea is keeping it alive. They even have entertainment shows about the making of new bands. The world is a big fucking place.

My wife and I watch K-dramaís together. They are fun and innocent. Might be something for Nacia to look up. Theyíre like television novels filtered through a Disneyesque reality.
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Originally Posted by Nacia View Post
I missed this one.
I like the play on words here especially the first two stanzsa.

Nancy from Momoland??

it is weird that men are called gigolos. I should really get to the origin
of this word to see why.

great writing as always Yonathan.
Look up Boom Boom by Momoland (I want to date of the members one day, Nancy per se.) There famous in Korea, have you not notice Kpop is blowing up right now? There was this song that was trending in Canada called Du-du-du by Blackpink.
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Look up Boom Boom by Momoland (I want to date of the members one day, Nancy per se.) There famous in Korea, have you not notice Kpop is blowing up right now? There was this song that was trending in Canada called Du-du-du by Blackpink.
I can't work out who she is there is so many of them
and no I have not noticed Kpop.
I have never heard of it but sure will when I look it up.
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do you know?! I can't work out who she is there is so many of them
and no I have not noticed Kpop.
I have never heard of it but sure will when I look it up.
Alright whatever floats your boat.
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I can't work out who she is there is so many of them
and no I have not noticed Kpop.
I have never heard of it but sure will when I look it up.


Download the DramaFever app and search for Korean dramas. Like I said, they are mini-series(novels) set as TV shows.
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Download the DramaFever app and search for Korean dramas. Like I said, they are mini-series(novels) set as TV shows.
Crunchyroll bro. Or this that DramaFever app free?
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Crunchyroll bro. Or this that DramaFever app free?


Nope. DramaFever is a subscription app, but you get everything. Crunchyroll is mostly anime.
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Nope. DramaFever is a subscription app, but you get everything. Crunchyroll is mostly anime.
Oh ok, never heard of DramaFever.
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