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Old 11-22-2011, 04:53 PM
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Hi I am Somni. My name is very special it means dreams. I am 15 years old in the 10th grade at Arkham High.

I love to write because it is the only way I can voice my mind with out Gale getting mad at me.

Gale... ... ... He's my boyfriend, I love him so much.There is just something about him that makes my mind go numb and my stomach to fill up with butterflies. There isn't anything I wouldn't do for him. Although, I haven't always known him.

He moved in down the street from me when we were in eight grade. My friends Anna, Tjaden and Charity say that I shouldn't hang out with him because he's bad news. I just can't help hanging out with him, when I am with him I feel less alone. I don't know what I would do without him.

My favorite subjects in school are English, Journalism and Theatre Arts.

My teachers all love me and I like them too, but don't tell Gale he don't like teachers.

I have never been in trouble at school before and neither has my childhood friend Joe, Gale don't like him either.

Everyone at school has seen Gale mad, laughing menacingly or cussing. BUT I am the only one who's seen him CRY.

Some words that have been used to describe me are talented, insecure and obsessed.

I disagree I am NOT obsessed. Gale loves me too, I think.

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We could start right before I have to tell my story.

Gale got in a huge fight with Joe and guns got involved. I was watching the fight when Gale gave me a gun and said "Finish him."

I had never even held a gun before but I knew that I could never hurt Joe, I known him forever. I lowered the gun refusing to kill my friend and then Gale pulled a gun and shot Joe. The shot went right through his shoulder and into mine.

I then without aiming fired at Gale and killed him. I didn't mean to. I just wanted to help Joe.
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Did that day change you? Did Joe live?
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I learned a lot about trust that day, Joe could have taken that gun away from me but he trusted me.

I don't know if he lives yet, I am lying in the hospital trying to explain to a cop why Gale and Joe were fighting, and where he got the guns from.

I am scared, they might blame me if Joe is dead.
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