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Old 08-10-2010, 10:14 AM
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A funny little ballad (of sorts) that I wrote awhile back but I think it still holds a tun or two in the modern digital scene...think of Buddy Holly ala "Peggy Sue" perhaps...

INTERNET LOVE

I was in a lonely chat room, lost in MSN,
When I reached out my cyber fingers and you invited me in…
You just wanted to IM you said,
And I was eager to give it a try….
But I couldn’t help but wonder if it could work,
Or would you bring another tear to my eye??

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Internet Love, Oh…Internet Love
Don’t hurt me again,
I’m your best friend.
Oh…Oh…Oh…My Internet Love…
Internet Love, Oh…Internet Love
Don’t push me away,
Cause I cannot pay
Another strain on my heart…

Then the time passed like we were meant to be,
I email you…you email me…
A far-reaching love as deep as the sea…
Separated by miles and keyboards…
I know you will be there…
I hope you will always care…
Or are you just one more lost, Internet Love?

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Internet Love, Oh…Internet Love
Don’t hurt me again,
I’m your best friend.
Oh…Oh…Oh…My Internet Love…
Internet Love, Oh…Internet Love
Don’t take me down,
Don’t make me frown…
Cause I cannot take…
Another strain on my heart…

As I sit staring at the screen, across the rift of space,
The warmth of your arms, the touch of your face…
Flooding the thoughts of my mind…
I cannot help but wonder about you…
And I want to reach out with my own two hands
And pull you close to my beating soul…
Is this it? Are you for real?

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Internet Love, Oh…Internet Love
Don’t hurt me again,
I’m your best friend.
But I cannot take another strain on my heart…

Oh…Oh…Oh…My Internet Love…
(Is this it? Are you for real?)
Internet Love, Oh…Internet Love
(Can it be true? Do I love you?)
My Internet friend…
(Come today to take me away!)
My Internet…Love…

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Old 09-23-2010, 10:02 PM
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It sounds like an ode for geeks. But on a serious note, I think it would work better as something comedic. I wouldn't take this seriously if it was meant to be taken seriously.
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