Good list poem! There are two lines that feel a little strained to my silent ear - 2nd - the word "and", 8th - the word "utmost" - I wonder if you have read it out loud to a friend and whether those lines work when spoken or catch a little bit.
If I did not tell you all the changes you might consider, I would be doing you a disservice, treating you with less than the full respect you deserve. This much I have learned from my years teaching and mentoring writers.
Riverstones let the water flow around them.