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Old 03-08-2018, 07:17 AM
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The Toxins are coming up! The Toxins are coming up! she joyfully ran across the open prairie watching the men below wreath in pain and choke on the bile heating up their stomachs they stuck out their tongues and heaved dry low guttural sounds of exhale... onto the pavement outside HQ.

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Old 03-08-2018, 02:58 PM
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Wish I had something further to add, but it looks like you already thought of everything.

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Old 03-08-2018, 07:29 PM
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Noted and succinct.

You always have more to add, that's not a problem or an apology, but a wonderful gift of being free.

Ken Nordine anyone?

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