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Old 03-07-2018, 05:28 AM
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All your stuff is pretty solid.

But I keep wanting to hear a hook/chorus or a bridge of some kind.

What's there is enough to keep my interest -- but it seems to me something to change it up would take it to a whole new level.

Otherwise -- good work.
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This is what I say when I work with people:

I can't do songs...

I just talk bollocks into a microphone...

It's kind of indicative of my personality... why everything I start, not just music wise, remains unfinished.
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Originally Posted by JohnConstantine View Post
This is what I say when I work with people:

I can't do songs...

I just talk bollocks into a microphone...
Yeah -- but that could probably be said of most rappers -- or a lot of them anyway. That's why it's usually a collaborative effort.

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