Warning: links to 2 very short stories involved. Asking people to compare styles.
That being said, Hi all.
What I'm asking is not a review of 2 stories (I'm not fishing for more reads, here, trying to cheat), but just a quick read or even a glimpse at two styles. I'm trying to develop my style.
I hope this isn't breaking any rules. I'd really appreciate if you would let me know what you think:
1) the shorter, faster paced style (http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=18441
2) the longer, more descriptive style (http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=18577
If you can explain why, I'd appreciate that even more. I plan to write several more in this vein, but could use a push.
Again, not a full review. Please ignore grammatical errors, spellings, plot, etc. Just pacing, descriptions, action, length, etc.
Thanks so much