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Old 01-07-2018, 03:12 PM
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I am so bored avoiding what I am going to write about here, now. Capitalism has created psychopaths, You can not function any longer in the USA without dealing with the syndicate. The replacement for “The Mob” but much more trite and nasty. They deal in dirt and poison, torture techniques solely for profit. Beyond pilfering and sadistic behavior. Depending heavily on the concept that aliens have invaded. And Satan is real. Real estate developers and speculator with the posse of henchmen the drug cartels, imported from down south. Their work force and butchers. Mind you this is motivated by shiny objects and stupidity. Give these fools the option of a life membership to going to art school or cooking classes and they might change direction. But since the production of redundant and useless objects has been on overload the funding has gone into developing weapons and technology which are intended to maim and exploited whatever the target group is. CIA and the likes are not any longer interested in traveling to foreign lands unless on adventures, armed and budded up. The pick is to state close to home and go after valuable assets close by, Running a full blown surveillance team down the ass to their target group and playing cant catch me. All the while vandalism vices are prolific. All art, jewelry, antiques, furniture bad copies made from man made rotting materials. Oozing black dye and filth. Talking about dirty, somebody has been working hard on developing materials , “Smart “ materials which deteriorate, they have to have a massive production facility to reproduce all this shit. Very well could be accessed by a tunnel system underground. They have to be involved in some underground, and I do mean physically underground as there is an abundance of soil dumped making high hills in parking lots and city streets, the middle of the roads now superseded the curbs by a long shot. In general these fools are ripping the infrastructure apart while you fools are looking at your phones. When you wake up there won't be anything left, just rubble. They intend on getting paid to fix the desolation in the end as they now run the construction sector, Mob is out the “Bad Boys” are in. They are idiots you are all going to die. The have and use technology to genocide.


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Old 01-07-2018, 04:56 PM
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these fools are ripping the infastrucer apart while you fools are looking at your phones

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My clamshell flip top is really keeping me from getting up to the speed of teched out ignorance that 90% of the American population is enjoying.

And I got no app to change this.
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Old 01-07-2018, 05:22 PM
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OK I did some corrections in spelling, Sorry.
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Old 01-07-2018, 05:51 PM
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OK I did some corrections in spelling, Sorry.
No need for sorry on my account.
I am good with any form of spelling that lets me get the message.


And I am also good with any interpretation of any comment I make.


Kinda like water receiving the form of whatever is immersed in it yet not giving up it's fluid nature.
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Break that up a little. The enter key is a wonderful tool. It's hard to read and rather annoying.

I don't post much in non-fiction, simply because articles and the like bore me, probably because I write so many, but I felt compelled to here.

You ramble on, not really making a point, other than to get off cell phones. The point you are trying to make is vague. You go from "capitalism sucks." to "everyone is contributing to the end because you can't stop playing candy crush". You just need to connect the ideas.

You really need to tone your mood down. I get that this was probably written in a fit of inspiration, but the tone is demeaning to the reader and that isn't something any major newspaper or website would publish.
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We make the medication and sell it to the syndicate. They donít know what it really is. They think it is to keep you chained, but they are wrong. Itís to free you. Because we love you. I love you.

And you are worth saving.

Give me a penny and I will give you back a dollar. Not a capitalist dollar, but one that can actually be spent. On oranges, and bananas, and rice (not the skinny useless stuff, but the fat golden nuggets that make your tummy full and happy).

Because we love you. I love you, and want you to be happy.

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Old 01-08-2018, 08:49 AM
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Lockette. Oh I do not know, it is what it is. I could go on , but why. You seem smart but determined. Very on point. What do you write about. My subject is difficult and dangerous. Not intending on submitting it to a newspaper, maybe going back once again to the FBI but then again maybe not.
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You sir are starting to tell

Your bosses are terrorists.

Citizens Arrest them

Sunflowers among the beat

Nobody is getting away

(STRIKEOUT)

Dude.. Use paragraphs
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Old 01-08-2018, 10:42 AM
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My clamshell flip top is really keeping me from getting up to the speed of teched out ignorance that 90% of the American population is enjoying.

And I got no app to change this.

hahaha what?
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hahaha what?


Yeah... what?!?!


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Old 01-08-2018, 11:57 AM
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Originally Posted by brianpatrick View Post
Yeah... what?!?!


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Clamshell cells need no cords

wait.

Bananas ringing.

Hello?

Grapes not here.
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Clamshell cells need no cords

wait.

Bananas ringing.

Hello?

Grapes not here.


Grapes not here?

Damn! I distinctly remember ordering a...

Can we make some fucking sense then?!

Is that too much to ask?

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Originally Posted by Beesauce View Post
hahaha what?
The part I quoted (I believe) refers to the commonplace activity of Americans being mesmerized by the various aspects of iPhones and the like.

My phone predates such devices and simply receives/makes calls. Yeah, voicemail and texting also.
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The part I quoted (I believe) refers to the commonplace activity of Americans being mesmerized by the various aspects of iPhones and the like.



My phone predates such devices and simply receives/makes calls. Yeah, voicemail and texting also.


How does that have anything to do with the syndicate man?


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Old 01-08-2018, 01:27 PM
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How does that have anything to do with the syndicate man?


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I was addressing the phone disparity aspect.

I leave the "syndicate man" aspect engagement to others.
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You people are wild.
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You people are wild.


Yes, well youíve whipped us into a frenzy, I suppose.


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Yes, well youíve whipped us into a frenzy

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I'm only at dull comprehension.

Gonna need a session with the cat o' nine tails to achieve alert awareness.
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Lockette. Oh I do not know, it is what it is. I could go on , but why. You seem smart but determined. Very on point. What do you write about. My subject is difficult and dangerous. Not intending on submitting it to a newspaper, maybe going back once again to the FBI but then again maybe not.
Whatever strikes me, but I mainly write fiction. I don't enjoy writing non-fiction. Too bland.

I think, that in a world where intelligence is so important, that one needs to keep their sword sharp, so to speak. Sadly, there aren't many ways to interact with someone while doing this. This place is one of the few places I can manage to do both.

I try and critique from a view of getting published. Most people who spin yarns would like to get published, at least, in my experience.
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Lockette, you post on a piece by sdenyer, "Too bland"?

My god, man -- what do you want?
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one needs to keep their sword sharp, so to speak.

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Yeah. This way, if they interrupt, you can cut them short.
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Old 01-12-2018, 04:14 AM
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Some things have to be told, my god I am not the right person to take on the role but so what, I am trapped with a task. It is difficult knowing how far to drag the public in on the story. Whats good for them and necessary. I would rather be doing fashion honestly. But the messages are relentless. So I flit between fiction and non fiction, but they are really asking for it. It is a death wish. This thing is going to blow. The truth is as always, real life is much more interesting than anything you can make up. Really and so much sadder. I do not get off on it.
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This reads like a blog. It seems to lack focus, and I had little idea what you were talking about. Where would you submit an article like this? Thank you for sharing it.
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This reads like a blog. It seems to lack focus, and I had little idea what you were talking about. Where would you submit an article like this? Thank you for sharing it.


Gateway probably. Or maybe Resnick.


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Originally Posted by Beesauce View Post
hahaha what?
He probably has a flip phone instead of smart phone

I only made the switch because going to a smart phone became the cheapest fastest internet I could get out in the sticks.
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He probably has a flip phone instead of smart phone
Yep.
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